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Well. That was inters ting. Is is just me or did this seem really long? Maybe just because you have a lot of one-liners, and shorter paragraphs. To be honest, ...

Hey there! Perks here on this lovely Review Day to critique your work, so let's go! First off, I'd like to thank you for asking me to review this. I'm ...

Bravo! This is like totally amazing! Excuse me while I go laugh for an hour while singing along to the pace... (............) Okay I'm good. You were brilliant in this ...

Well... this was rather interesting. I like your idea, and how you wrote this, but there are a few things I would change. First though, this is what I liked. ...

Wow. That was so amazing. Great job! I really love the rhythm and the message is just heartbreaking. I like how you put the same stanza (well, almost) at the ...

Why hello there! Welcome to YWS new member! I hope you have a great time on here and don't mind how crazy we all can be! On to to the ...

So. This was pretty interesting. Maybe later I'll read the other chapters for this, so I understand more clearly all of the concepts with the "lights" and everything, but for ...

Huh... this was rather interesting and sweet, in my opinion. I agree with you on that note, someone's writing really can and does represent the person. It' neat how by ...

Hmm... that was pretty interesting. Good start for a story! I rather liked that. I liked the "If we had__ every time" that was funny. This almost reads like a ...

This is going to be a completely crappy review, but oh well. It'll be my first review in months, so, yippee! My God... you brilliant writer. I love you for ...

Huh... well that was very different. What lovely parents he has. I rather liked the way you wrote this, incorporating the main character's thoughts. I also liked how it wasn't ...

Hey there! Perks here to do a review for the April Review Day. Let me just say that I haven't read your other chapters, so I won't really talk much ...

Well this is the cutest thing! Please tell your brother thanks for writing this. I've personally only had cotton candy three or four times in my whole life, but this ...

Hey there! First impression: yes you updated! Thanks so much. I was so happy that I noticed you wrote another chapter for this story. Wow! This is another great addition, ...

Hey there! I'm finally doing my first Review Day! Yay! Let me just say: this is based off of Ranger's Apprentice a little right? I love that series so much... ...