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Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Three
Hello again! I am amazed by how well you're writing this story, while I am also quite excited by how well you're writing this. ^^ I'm looking over my past ...
Jan 10, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Two
Hello again! I was quite interested by the first chapter, so I was happy to see this next one up so soon XD To go from the start, I read ...
Jan 8, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One
Hello there! I wanted to give a few thoughts on this first chapter of a brand new story! ^^ Already from the start, we have a curious insight into who ...
Jan 6, 2020 -
Re: Bridge Guard Guideline Memo (Revision #15)
Hello there! I’m popping in to give a quick review on this unique work of yours. There’s not too much to really critique on this, but I would like to ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: Lone Wolf - Chapter One
Hello again! This work is now the oldest one in the Green Room, so I figured I would step in and give a second review to you. ^^ I just ...
Jan 2, 2020 -
Re: Sacrificing Oath- Chapter 2
Hello there! I am dropping by this lovely new year to give you a second review on this story of yours. Hopefully we all can help clean up the Green ...
Jan 1, 2020 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 7.3
Hey, Omelas! I really think that this ended in a delightful way, and I want to say a belated congratulations on finishing A Janitor's Adventure. ^^ Going over this seventh ...
Dec 12, 2019 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 7.1
Hey there, I'm finally popping back in here to review some parts of Janny's adventure. ^^ Since I've fallen behind in this story, I can at least assume that Janny ...
Nov 30, 2019 -
Re: How Do You Plead: Prologue
Hello there C: I figured I would stop by and give you a little feedback on this novel that I've been very excited to get to read! Since this is ...
Sep 28, 2019 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.1
Hey there Bisc! I was quite curious to check out some of these LMS novels, so I've finally arrived at this one. I do hope to go and review the ...
Sep 26, 2019 -
Re: crushing
Hey there Mage! One last poem to finish up tonight, but I do hope you write more poetry in the future so I can read them over XD This poem ...
Sep 14, 2019 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 2
And this is more curious than before! If the view tends to switch between multiple characters, then I would be more inclined to see where else this goes - but ...
Sep 14, 2019 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 1
Hm interesting! I've come from the prologue to take a peek at this next chapter, yet this is a lot different than what I thought would happen. This seems like ...
Sep 14, 2019 -
Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Prologue
Hey there! I just wanted to leave a couple of notes to think about for the rest of this story. ^^ 1. I think giving a name to these scientists ...
Sep 14, 2019 -
Re: Father's don't just love every now and then
Hey Amnesia. I’m really sorry for your loss and I hope you’re hanging in there. I just wanted to leave a few notes on this story of yours to hopefully ...
Sep 14, 2019
