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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Three

    Hello again! I am amazed by how well you're writing this story, while I am also quite excited by how well you're writing this. ^^ I'm looking over my past ...

    Jan 10, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Two

    Hello again! I was quite interested by the first chapter, so I was happy to see this next one up so soon XD To go from the start, I read ...

    Jan 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One

    Hello there! I wanted to give a few thoughts on this first chapter of a brand new story! ^^ Already from the start, we have a curious insight into who ...

    Jan 6, 2020
  • Other » Other, General Re: Bridge Guard Guideline Memo (Revision #15)

    Hello there! I’m popping in to give a quick review on this unique work of yours. There’s not too much to really critique on this, but I would like to ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Lone Wolf - Chapter One

    Hello again! This work is now the oldest one in the Green Room, so I figured I would step in and give a second review to you. ^^ I just ...

    Jan 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Sacrificing Oath- Chapter 2

    Hello there! I am dropping by this lovely new year to give you a second review on this story of yours. Hopefully we all can help clean up the Green ...

    Jan 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 7.3

    Hey, Omelas! I really think that this ended in a delightful way, and I want to say a belated congratulations on finishing A Janitor's Adventure. ^^ Going over this seventh ...

    Dec 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 7.1

    Hey there, I'm finally popping back in here to review some parts of Janny's adventure. ^^ Since I've fallen behind in this story, I can at least assume that Janny ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: Prologue

    Hello there C: I figured I would stop by and give you a little feedback on this novel that I've been very excited to get to read! Since this is ...

    Sep 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.1

    Hey there Bisc! I was quite curious to check out some of these LMS novels, so I've finally arrived at this one. I do hope to go and review the ...

    Sep 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: crushing

    Hey there Mage! One last poem to finish up tonight, but I do hope you write more poetry in the future so I can read them over XD This poem ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 2

    And this is more curious than before! If the view tends to switch between multiple characters, then I would be more inclined to see where else this goes - but ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 1

    Hm interesting! I've come from the prologue to take a peek at this next chapter, yet this is a lot different than what I thought would happen. This seems like ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Prologue

    Hey there! I just wanted to leave a couple of notes to think about for the rest of this story. ^^ 1. I think giving a name to these scientists ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Father's don't just love every now and then

    Hey Amnesia. I’m really sorry for your loss and I hope you’re hanging in there. I just wanted to leave a few notes on this story of yours to hopefully ...

    Sep 15, 2019


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear