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Re: The Adventures of Jake and Isabelle (chapter 1)
I loved the story. Saw no problems of any kind, looking forward to your next chapters and how you continue the story. Would love to know whenever you get around ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: It's Complicated Pt. 3
Yeah I will read the fourth as soon as I have more time. Haven't had any last week, baby sister being on spring break took it all. :) I have ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 2 (Escaping Dash)
I seen plenty of people posting today. Dozens of things each earlier in fact. Green room was at 72 but dropped half. It was in a constant flux a few ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 2 (Escaping Dash)
This is a really good story. I'm looking forward to all the future chapters. By the way awesome one liner at the end.
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Part 2: Wrong Predictions
By the way is this a true story or based on one?
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Four Punishment
It's based in 1400s earth so sorcery was considered evil. Those accused of having it were sentenced to death. By the way love the nickname team ketchup lol. I haven't ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Four Punishment
It's based in 1400s earth so sorcery was considered evil. Those accused of having it were sentenced to death. By the way love the nickname team ketchup lol. I haven't ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Twin Blades Chapter 5 Disagreement
Yeah you should read the first couple paragraphs on chapter one it will clear all the confusion in the beginning of the review. :) In short to solve your confusion, ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Five Yggdrassil
I have not switched tenses in any of the chapters, not sure where that misunderstanding is coming from. This chapter was originally longer but I reduced it when I took ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Four Punishment
Kevin reflects my real name and personality. All of the main characters aside from a handful are named after a person of significance in my life at some point. Flint ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Four Punishment
Kevin reflects my real name and personality. All of the main characters aside from a handful are named after a person of significance in my life at some point. Flint ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Isolation Zone Chapter One
Lol, yeah I would publish the other chapters while it's free but I want to let my friend look them over first.
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Isolation Zone Chapter One
It's spelled comma but yeah some of them are probably wrong. Coma is what it's called if someone is asleep and doesn't wake up for a long amount of time. ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: :Prologue
You did amazing already :)
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Five Yggdrassil
This is chapter 5 it said it in the title. Didn't notice that Yukio mistake but I will fix it now.
Mar 29, 2015