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Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 7
It was a really good story and I will definitely be following it from here anyways. Although I was confused at parts because of how many typos there was. Hopefully ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Model Family
Yeah I'm not sure which csi because there was three but I think it was the one with the short, thin, dark haired, young, white guy in charge. Wasn't saying ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Model Family
Yeah I'm not sure which csi because there was three but I think it was the one with the short, thin, dark haired, young, white guy in charge. Wasn't saying ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: It's Complicated Pt. 4
It was about something that happened in the third part.
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Cards Dealt Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 (sorry it's so long)
That makes sense actually, no guidance leading to irresponsibility. Also patriarch Patrick seems more like a father than brother. Her nightmare makes sense to. Although that said I grew up ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 1
Happy to help then, I was a bit of a dinosaur nut once. :) Sorry about the double post it's an annoying little glitch.
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Mavin's Ten Adventures Chapter 1 [Reworked]
This was really good, but that's my rpg gamer side obsessing. I have to ask if this was inspired by a game you played. As a hard core gamer it ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One
Yeah I know what it's like, I have probably a quarter of the family members I did when I was born. Happy to review, I'm challenging myself to see how ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One
Yeah I know what it's like, I have probably a quarter of the family members I did when I was born. Happy to review, I'm challenging myself to see how ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One
Yeah I know what it's like, I have probably a quarter of the family members I did when I was born. Happy to review, I'm challenging myself to see how ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 1
That's a good idea, most assume the most deadly was a t rex, or something. But it actually was neither. Also the original 3 Jurassic park movies showed only about ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 1
That's a good idea, most assume the most deadly was a t rex, or something. But it actually was neither. Also the original 3 Jurassic park movies showed only about ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 1
It will obviously be a carnivor dino, I'm curious just how many kinds you plan to use. But I'm sure that will be specified as the story goes on.
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Kaori's Treaty-Chapter One~ Hiding
I will, it's a really good story.
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Don't Let It Out
Alright, sorry for the double messages it's a glitch on the site.
Apr 20, 2015