kevin25a

Well that was really long. Props to you for taking the time to write it all. I know that would have taken me a month at least. It was a ...

Well this was really good, I look forward to your next chapters. I hope to see another chapter soon. :) It's tough to decide when you feel like you're in ...

I definitely look forward to your story, and would love a notification when you publish the next chapter. I love the perfect cliffhanger too, great job. I see a dead ...

Well victims who choose to stay with the person are part of the problem. The majority of the blame is the one who abuses others, and if they do it ...

Well it looks like it's coming to a conclusion. I look forward to the epic battle about to happen. It's a really good story and I'm glad I started following ...

I totally agree, fakeness leads to success in today's world. While the most honest people are kicked back down anytime they stand up for what is right. It's people like ...

Well this was really good. Sad, depressing, happy, joyful, and awesome. I'm not usually into sappy emotional stuff, but I'm a huge sap for true romance. I absolutely loved the ...

I liked it, personally I stopped playing after platinum because the show and games just get crappier and dumber in plot and things added. But your story is awesome. I ...

Ok so I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters, but I don't really think it is why I feel confused. First problem I noticed was the ...

I think mind would work with the idea figuratively, but body makes more literal sense although it sounds odd and doesn't flow as well. I liked this chapter a lot ...

So the guys who saved her are meant to be real people? Why is a guy named Ashley? Ash can be used for a guy, because it's short for Ashton. ...

I really liked the way you did this prologue. A perfect cliffhanger, not to detailed, and just enough to pull in a reader. I look forward to following your story, ...

Well in a chapter or two I can say it's goin down fo real. On with the review, I love this story. I'm glad I followed ot from the beginning ...

Dun dun dun. That ending, CALLED IT! Onto the review. No spelling problems,no wrong punctuation I noticed anyways. I love the way you are developing the story, and the pace ...

It depends on if you want a plot outside the sex of an adult novel or want to write crap like fifty shades of grey where it's all about sex. ...