kevin25a

This is a really good story, and I definitely intend to follow it. I love the creative writing tool she used, its been used in movies tons of times but ...

I don't posses the patience to read a whole book in a single sitting sadly. But I read for a half hour or so. I noticed a missing quotation in ...

It's a first chapter, it's better to have it start this way than have to much going on to follow. That said I didn't think there was to little going ...

That ending is ominous. It leaves just enough room to wonder if he was acting and warning her of something someone else was about to do, or if he was ...

X men references, good job, it was... clever. Would have been funny if you made a character name Gertrude just for that chapter, even if you changed it later. Not ...

Well this seemed a little short, but I will try to do my review. :) It's a ironic one of the investigators went to the same high school as one ...

Hehe the brat is mad because Cade didn't like her, it's like a sense of early karma. You know your too oblivious when you almost walk in front of what ...

Ok I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters. Well that was diff, in a good way though. Was that a final chapter? I'm looking forward to ...

Well this was really good, it's also based on actual history something most fail at. I was wondering if it's the end of the story or not. I look forward ...

Well that's certainly a unique way to explain the link between a vampire and the human they turn. Not quite sure on the definition of progeny, but I see the ...

This was fucking awesome. I totally hope you continue it, because this could go so many places, and isn't really much different from a common dictatorship. It's definitely a story ...

Well this is an interesting story that's for sure, a school with color changing walls, where stuff randomly appears and disappears or changes. And of course a guy in literally ...

This was really awesome and I definitely look forward to your story possibly continuing. I loved it and it gave me a sword art online feel too it which I ...

Well this chapter was really good I love where you are taking it and look forward to your next chapters. It's good fleck is making new friends, and possibly... building ...

Well that was really a really good conclusion to the chapter. Called it! He got caught, now the question about what happens next, I imagine he will just be locked ...