kendallelise

lovely! this IS a sad poem :( I love how you took the words from the first stanza and continued them throughout the poem! one nit-picky thing I have to ...

hello! I really enjoyed reading this poem :) the one part where I stumbled was the ending of the first stanza, where you say Heat me until I boil, Trouble ...

good job! nice prose. Such Sophistication, Sophistication. I didn't like the ending, however. I felt it unnecessary to add that last bit in there. It distracted me from the entire ...

Generally, I like it! keep writing, much potential. I like how you finished the poem - short and sweet. for some reason I didn't exactly like the lines And i ...