kelseyforgotss

This is both depressing, and wonderful. Most of all, however, it is incredibly relatable. I love the stanza about the thighs, as that is such a huge insecurity of mine. ...

I would hardly call this 'mushy love stuff' - she leaves. She makes no effort, that heartless woman. He is left to wallow in his self pity and his despair.

Well that was depressing and suspenseful. Sigh. The only thing I would change is some of your punctuation - you don't need so many exclamation points, as they take away ...

Fine by me! :)

I love this. I love this so much. There are some punctuation errors, but it is so flowing and perfect and.. I love it. +Applause+

I do not know how to edit the poem, and I apologize for my typo. To me, these poems have a lyrical form, just in their simplicity and harmony. Thanks ...

I'm still a Girl Scout, and I am 18! :P I definitely agree that that stanza is wonderful, and your thoughts about society dragging us down is interesting. Keep reviewing, ...

Simple typing error, oops! Thank you so much, it's a wonderful first review!

Definitely a love gone wrong.. I agree that you could analyze them forever: they are so short that the meaning is either blatantly obvious, or nonexistent. However, with the lack ...

Butterflies should have been capitalized, oops! Simple typing error. Thank you :)

It is VERY short! I am sorry to say that there is not more to this poem, just a story and this one, short, sentence. Thank you :)

Thank you for your review! I enjoy short poetry, as it tends to get the point across without being too blatant. A person's - especially a child or a teen's ...

I am very pleased at your interpretation, though it was not exactly what I had in mind when I wrote it. (However, isn't that what poetry is about? Interpreting it ...

With eating disorders, it is common to be overcome by thoughts and actions revolving around the disorder. Rarely do those affected focus on their lives. The line 'dreams too thin' ...

If you'll notice, the mirror tells such 'petty lies', not pretty. They are told to pretty girls, saying that they are not, and never will be, good enough. Thank you ...