kelseyforgotss

For starters, I like the title. Different IS okay. It is not saying that different can be okay, or that different might be okay, but that it has been, is, ...

I like that the narrator has such different feelings: that makes it feel real. However, the poem bounces around too much. You do not give the reader enough time to ...

My Dear Love, Without you in my life, the sun has refused to shine, birds have forgotten to sing, and plants no longer bloom. Everythings a dark gray; in these, ...

This poem is very dark, yet so very touching. I was born with a brain disorder that affected my eyes, and as I grew up, they feared that I would ...

Despite the spelling and punctuation errors that were fixed previously, I quite liked this. However, I feel that it is more of a short story than a poem. Maybe it ...

They arrived at the station, close to 4pm; a hot breeze blew against them. Close by, tin shoes clicked on the pavement. Three aged suitcases were stacked between them. (Stacked ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem, yet I feel that the stanzas could have been broken up a little better. There were a few punctuation mistakes, but otherwise, it was ...

"I'm jealous of everything that gets to know you: how the wind steals your perfume, how the sun touches your skin on a sunny afternoon, and how I reminisce about ...