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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Solstice- Chapter 2- The First Execution

    I'm pretty tired so I'm not going to be doing my regular thing. I'm just going to be rambling hope that's ok. I don't know what sketches but this is ...

    Aug 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The life machine #1

    When I smiled: That ending. I fully saw coming yet was still hard to read a level of the build up with the characters where it becomes pretty plain that ...

    Aug 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Story 2 #1

    When I smiled: This was a rather interesting tale. Jack's fight with depression and potentially. Schizophrenia shows a quite deep meaning in this trauma and his want to be normal ...

    Jul 22, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Solstice- Chapter 1- The Last Abnormality

    When I Smiled: This was a rich chapter full of a bunch of different things that stuck out to me. First I like the friendship between Valerie and Rose, symbolizing ...

    Jul 15, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The death of an Angel

    Well dang I haven't read past book 7 but goodness gracious. When I Smiled: Well, that was a dark one.It's very interesting to see how Scott Cawthon outlines his stories ...

    Jul 10, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Everbound Book One : The Satanic Method Part 1.1.

    When I smiled: This was pretty well done. The idea of someone who regretted ever at leaching into the unknown forces of nature beyond what is considered normal and natural ...

    Jul 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Letters You Will Never Read

    This story reflects a sad thing that follows a breakup, showing how the person can be affected to the point where they don't even feel like the same person anymore. ...

    Jul 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Supernatural Re: Seafaring Problem

    When I smiled: To start out, I like how the story is framed. The group having to go after ghosts. And them being ready to fight them without any equipment ...

    Jul 5, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: me and every cat i've loved before

    When I smiled: This was a very wholesome story. I really liked how you portrayed the cats you got and gave deep descriptions of each one, while also explaining the ...

    Jul 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Of Victory and Death - Chapter 1: The Visitation

    When I smiled: Right off the bat, I love how Elysia is characterized as someone who is chaotic but likes consistency, showing aspects of both her parents. It feels interesting. ...

    Jul 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Pandora Shattered. ( Slightly revised.)

    Well, that was cool. The connection to a mythical figure like Pandora showed a want for curiosity, and a want for something new. It gives a perfect representation of that ...

    Jul 1, 2024
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: Call of the Depths

    For your first one, it was an interesting story, you show potential. When I smiled: From the get-go the depiction of the main character as sort of greedy, selfish and ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow of the Leviathan: Chapter 2 - "The Waltz of Doom"

    When I smiled: Well, that could have gone better. First of all I like how you painted his anxiety as freaking out whenever something happened and also noting several instances ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Bone Boy: Part Two

    A Vampirecone story with a happy ending?! Or do they all? Idk I need to read more of yours. When I smiled: This was just wholesome. I like how Roxanne ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Haunting

    When I smiled: This was interesting, I like how it shows a slow acceptance of the situation that they've gotten in. Both of them have no thoughts but saving the ...

    Jun 17, 2024


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein