Young Writers Society

I'm pretty tired so I'm not going to be doing my regular thing. I'm just going to be rambling hope that's ok. I don't know what sketches but this is ...

When I smiled: That ending. I fully saw coming yet was still hard to read a level of the build up with the characters where it becomes pretty plain that ...

When I smiled: This was a rather interesting tale. Jack's fight with depression and potentially. Schizophrenia shows a quite deep meaning in this trauma and his want to be normal ...

When I Smiled: This was a rich chapter full of a bunch of different things that stuck out to me. First I like the friendship between Valerie and Rose, symbolizing ...

Well dang I haven't read past book 7 but goodness gracious. When I Smiled: Well, that was a dark one.It's very interesting to see how Scott Cawthon outlines his stories ...

When I smiled: This was pretty well done. The idea of someone who regretted ever at leaching into the unknown forces of nature beyond what is considered normal and natural ...

This story reflects a sad thing that follows a breakup, showing how the person can be affected to the point where they don't even feel like the same person anymore. ...

When I smiled: To start out, I like how the story is framed. The group having to go after ghosts. And them being ready to fight them without any equipment ...

When I smiled: This was a very wholesome story. I really liked how you portrayed the cats you got and gave deep descriptions of each one, while also explaining the ...

When I smiled: Right off the bat, I love how Elysia is characterized as someone who is chaotic but likes consistency, showing aspects of both her parents. It feels interesting. ...

Well, that was cool. The connection to a mythical figure like Pandora showed a want for curiosity, and a want for something new. It gives a perfect representation of that ...

For your first one, it was an interesting story, you show potential. When I smiled: From the get-go the depiction of the main character as sort of greedy, selfish and ...

When I smiled: Well, that could have gone better. First of all I like how you painted his anxiety as freaking out whenever something happened and also noting several instances ...

A Vampirecone story with a happy ending?! Or do they all? Idk I need to read more of yours. When I smiled: This was just wholesome. I like how Roxanne ...

When I smiled: This was interesting, I like how it shows a slow acceptance of the situation that they've gotten in. Both of them have no thoughts but saving the ...