kcglitter

First of all that write on thing made me think of Fly on fang from Maximum ride...not the point...yeah I’m glad you noticed that I put it in Si-fi, the ...

this is really good. I loved reading it, but it could have been longer. eight out of ten...

nice... i liked it, but there really was no image to it. I'll be nice here and give you a four out of ten. Next time try to really imagen ...

I really like this it spoke the truth of what most kids feel these days.

I like that you are honest with me i will keep this in mind next time thanks

Thanks a lot to those who read this. It took me a while to get the courage to put it on YWS but I just needed to get it out. ...

I like this; it speaks of betray and second chances. I also love the fact that it’s about love grate.

I loved this plus it's kind of random. I actually understand what you meant right away, in other poems it sometimes take a while before someone gets the point of ...

I loved it a lot nothing wrong with it as fare as spelling goes, but the age she grade nine right and Jasper is missing other then that it’s fine ...

Oh I like it and then I don't like it, there’s too much image not enough rhythm

cute i loved it a lot

it's my first one I'm not much of a poet but i'll work on it thankx

thank you I'll edit it

Hey Kcglitter here I loved it alot it was so sad can't wait for your next story

try something dark like death