kazzykay

I was drawn in from the first sentence its a real hook. it could mean anything. It stole my attention and i just wanted to read more. thank u for ...

I love this poem. It's so DEEP! I'm not good at correcting grammar so I'll leave that to sombody else. As I was reading through this, I began wondering what ...

THANK YOU :) I DO NOT KNOW HOW TO PUNCTUATE IN POETRY PLEASE HELP ME

wow this is really good. Now I'm not the best person to give criticism cuz everything i read is good and i write like im texting but when i read ...

Oh and "The friend" is giana i should probably make that clear in the entry

Deanie, I will definitely fix those comas! I get what you mean by the "double explanation" i thought it added effect lol. The detail is lacking a bit i guess. ...

Bex, Thank you so much for your input! It really helped! I am not the best with grammar but that you can tell haha. I've never gotten feedback before! I ...

this is really deep i love it