kazie

NOO I like that you are taking space! I actually feel noticed. I someday want to write a book of all my poems! And i said ALL even my sucky ...

Yeah thanks! i feel apreciated for a change. my parents dont really like that i write. they think its good but they dont like that i love it. its my ...

Yea can u figure out what silver was doing?

Yes its a poem 4 class about my perfect world the thunder in the distance means the worst has past in the day before.

Ok well I am kinda just brushing in and out in class and all but i will take the time i swear to look at ur suggestions thank you!

THANKS AGAIN YOU GUYS!

THANKS!!! IM SOO HAPPY I LOVE TOO WRITE!

Thanks! I appreciate ur comments

Thank you! IM SO HAPPY SOMEONE LOOKED AT MY WORK!!! LOL i like ppl being honest and telling me how 2 improve

yeah but i always start them in a jumble b4 i get them structured. its a writing technique i use. more creative and then i format it and it turns ...

its a haiku there isnt much space or syllables for too much. i like it but that is my opinion.

actually yea. i feel like my whole world is crumbling. thus so am i.

yea i think its good. i love poetry. i have a whole notebook and as i continue to write they only get better.

It has great imagery. i like it. it doesnt suck. maybe you know you could do better but as far as my opinion goes i think it's good!

"Hope" Trying my hardest to find something worth keeping. Something to hold on to. But knowing that i am to be forever on my own.