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Re: New Normals
Good day! I love your poem, especially the intriguing format. It shows the sway of her thoughts - how her mind creeps around the change that aggravates her state. I ...
Apr 1, 2020 -
Re: Hold your Breath
'ello there! I love this pensive poem you've written. It travels around the idea that despite the fear of falling in love, curiosity still lurks in you. The feeling that ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Cotton Mill
Hello there! Oh my goodness! I really love historical poems and this was a good one. I felt the narrator's exhaustion, lack of motivation, and aversion towards the cotton mill ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Him
Hello there! Such an angsty poem you got there (in a good way). For me, the poem should be more descriptive. You could add some metaphors, imagery, or idioms since ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Control The Chaos
Good day! I do like the feelings conveyed in your poem; It is dramatic, just as you classified. I've relate to this many times for I really do see the ...
Jan 5, 2018 -
Re: Insecurties
Good day Junel! Your poem is really something. It is so relatable and so relevant to the current generation. I love this because I could feel your bitterness and resentment ...
Jan 5, 2018
