kasimkaey

Haha! I loved this! This is just great. Your grammar and stuff seems to be pretty perfect but wow, I love this idea. I started reading and was like huh, ...

Okay...this is a pretty confusing piece. I don't actually know what's happening, just that there seem to be a guy and another guy and a girl that appears to be ...

I really enjoyed this piece...except for the starting. It felt a bit weirdly philosophical and so, I was expecting like a moral at the end and when that moral never ...

This whole piece kinda confused me a little. Don't get me wrong, I completely and utterly understood what was happening but the starting was a bit confusing and very disoriented. ...

I didn't quite understand this piece. I mean, I get the moral at the end and everything but as LouisCyoher said, it was more of him being a nice guy ...

You said face face on the first line of the fourth paragraph and in the seventh paragraph, you said "we was told" and I think you meant "he"? I liked ...

I'm going to be OCD now and point out that in the first paragraph, you've wrote beautify and I think you might have meant beautiful? Now that that's over with. ...

I find first person writing quite hard as well but this was alright. I mean, it wasn't spectacularly good or anything but it wasn't bad either. I guess the only ...

Wow, this was pretty intense...I have to admit, the amount of information given in the first paragraph was a bit too much and kinda bored me a little but then, ...

This was pretty amazing to read. The tension, the suspense, the pain, everything about it was done so vividly. At first, I thought I was reading a scene from Game ...

I like how you've incorporated the rain into this a lot. A tad cliche, but what isn't by now. I would say that the piece reads more like a poem ...

To me, it seems like this really was written out of a lot of anger, and maybe that's why the poem isn't that polished. But that very effect right there ...

So I got kinda bored off this and didn't even read the last quarter properly because my attention was slipping so badly. I apologise for this first and foremost. The ...

I don't know much about poetry. I'm just going to say that before I say anything else so that you know this review is pretty much pointless. I liked it. ...

This was good! A little predictable at the end but good nonetheless. I like how he's just so drunk all the time and can't really remember anything after. I have ...