So I got kinda bored off this and didn't even read the last quarter properly because my attention was slipping so badly. I apologise for this first and foremost.

The writing here isn't very good. You slip tenses a lot and, I think, without even realising it. There is a lack of punctuation and the writing itself just doesn't flow.

The plot is rather infuriating in that it doesn't even give us why this is happening but just what's happening. Not why they're there, but what they're doing. It reminds me off Micheal Bay's films Battleship - who cares why these aliens are here, just look at the pretty effects and be quiet. Except here, the effects aren't very good either.

I don't say this to be mean and I hope you don't get offended by my comments, you just need to work on your writing a lot.