karinawhitney

Hi, Good job! I thought that this was a very good poem! I kind of felt that it was talking about The Giver because you put things like "We never ...

I really liked this poem and in my mind I felt like it had a lot of symbolism to mans curiosity and how "curiosity killed the cat". I kind of ...

Hello it's karina, I could totally tell it was a personal poem. I felt like instead of having bullets you should have numbered you stanzas so rather than "•Once they ...

Lovely! This was an amazingly beautiful poem! Found almost no mistakes with it (other than just things that I would do that YOU don't have to do). I had to ...

Hello! I definitely loved this poem it is very nice and you give the reader a great description with some sensory details and I loved the similes and metaphors. I ...

Hi there, I definitely like this poem i feel like you captivate the readers with the first line "I wish to speak, but my hands are tied." It gets you ...

hi there, All i can say is wow this is a very well put together poem. I definitely love the personification you used for each of the natural causes. The ...

This was quite the mystery, It took me some time to find out your odd ( a very good odd) thoughts on society and how our life works. I totally ...

Hi there, I totally absolutely love this poem it describes the feeling of yearning for a loved one perfectly. i love this part : "Tick away to the moment we ...

Hi. I thought this was a gorgeous poem! I love how you effectively created a mood of romance while being able to sustain the essence of mysteriousness. This definitely reminded ...