kaiden

It's okay Jojo I totally understand. This poem is far from perfect but it's just that I've never actually done a poem that hasn't rhymed... I don't really know how ...

About that content together the pleasure line... I look at it now and I don't remember what I was trying to say there. I think I just forgot to finish ...

Wow thanks guys! I appreciate the comments! I'll definitely look into editing this piece now.

Thanks for the review guys! I never expected my poem to be in the featured works, it's a big first for me. :D but just so everyone knows, when I ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! It means a lot to me! To TheNewHero, I guess you could. Let me know if it works! haha

Thanks for the review! Yeah I basically just poured everything from the top of my mind to paper. Could you elaborate a bit more on what you meant by explaining ...

haha i've had that happen to me too.

Yes I do need to make the ocean more understandable to Heaven. Good questions too, perhaps I shall find a way to put it in...

ahh it appears i wasn't clear enough, i wanted the ocean to be synonymous with Heaven. So basically the ocean is Heaven because in Heaven there are no more trials ...

yeah that makes sense. at first i thought they'd be part of the Western group or something. thanks for clearing that up!

Haha yeah ok so if Soto, Kira, and Aisha are all poor, what category do they fit in? like sure they might be of different ethnicities but maybe to others ...

Ok so yeah now I see where you're going with this. I just wonder how Bella will react to Jacob, and what Mike may be thinking right now. keep up ...