juulman

Greetings, or however you are supposed to start a review organically lol anyways, I liked this work a lot. I have not read any of your other work, but this ...

Hello, It has been a while since I wrote a review, so excuse me if I am a bit rusty. First off, I really like the flow of this poem, ...

First off welcome to YWS, This seems to be your first poem and I quiet like it I think it captures the Zeitgeist well. It communicates a certain feeling that ...

This poems headline grabbed me since it already evokes quite a strong sense of emotion an emotion we have all felt at least once. That unique blend of disappointment and ...

TLDR: I like your story, its very good. Its clear you put a lot of thoughts into this as the themes play together very well and the science fiction setting ...

First off welcome since this is your first story if I am not mistaken, so again here's a warm welcome or as warm as one can be over text. Now ...

This is a great read and thought provoking in a natural unforced way. I almost don't want to review this because dissecting something often makes it loose its magic but ...

You can feel the grief of this poem. I agree with aquarious that the repeating lines about playing cards are one of the best features of this poem. It really ...

This story has a very intriguing title which drew me in immediately. I mean it sounds like the title of a famous Russian novel of 3000 pages you should have ...

Puns really have a way of putting a smile on your face no matter how ... they are. I have to say I really enjoyed reading this and it put ...