justthisonce

I really like this. It was good. I liked the resolution of the poem in particular. I think the "I feel no regret,/for to feel is to die" lines needed ...

Woah, okay. What I really appreciate about this piece is it's ability to transport the reader. I feel all the things Timba feels as I read them. My curiosity grows ...

I really like the range of emotions explicated in this piece. It's really entertaining. I would have liked a bit more internal expression, as a lot of vocal and psychical ...

I love the stream of consciousness vibe I am picking up from this poem. The structure is very loose, and the topic is intriguing. I think the content, although complex ...

I like the theme and idea communicated here. It just seems very obvious and a little cliche. The rhythm in some areas is awkward. The pacing of the second and ...

This was an excellently worded poem. It seemed so carefully written and thoughtful. It causes the reader to question and re-read and relate. I found myself saying, that's odd- we ...

I really love your description in this piece. I think it captures/communicates what your trying to convey really nicely. This is what writers block feels like for me, essentially. The ...

Hey, I'm new! I write poetry but very sparingly. I agree with Blackwood, the orientation of the stanzas is uncomfortable. I also think the last stanza uses 'me' too often. ...