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heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey take it real cool cos you are really killing me with this great stuff. am surely impressed,as a matter of fact i thought u were speaking to me. keep ...

hey..............nice work in there,keep it up!

wooooooooooooooooow i must confess i really liked that piece of work. its eally great....especially the rhymes

hmmmmmmmmmm....get more stuff.

wow! that was really nice rachael....i really liked the repitition of ''its so frightening''. cool job lady...keep it up.

i was a bit surrised with the emergence of the lats line although i still liked the poem.

i really liked the idea but think u have to watch ur caitalization kee it u.

its cool....wat else can i say? ee the good work going.

may be u should check ur spellings...they are mistaken especially in verse 2. its good work any way. i like it.

cant really understand its basics cos of the slangs and jagons used

hey, nice work u had there i must admit. keep it up.