jolene15

figuratively

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This poem is great. I can relate to this other then my dad is not dead just has been in my life off in on throughout me growing up. I ...

This poem is great. I can relate to this other then my dad is not dead just has been in my life off in on throughout me growing up. I ...

I wrote this poem when I was around 10-12 years old first poem I ever wrote. I love it the way it is. I know it as spelling errors and ...

I write because I enjoy it. I like the poem the way it is sorry for your hate towards it but its staying the way it is.

I did not mean to put the random capital letter in the poem...but other then that I like that line the way it is. Shows its my work and no ...

You are to chew on all the pain and regret you feel the boyfriend/girlfriend is feeling after you tell him all the reasons you care and wish you were with ...

Ya I have noticed I have made some mistakes and typos. Thanks for liking it. I have to yes explain more and when I figure out how I wanna do ...

I have fixed the words so they are in a stack form but I do not completely understand what you mean by "You lack that excellent imagery you'll find in ...

Thanks and Yes the comments do help but this is the way I like it. I did yes change what most of you said was wrong with it.

okay thank you I will fix them numbers in to words honestly forgot I wrote it like that my bad...and not all poem have to have a rhythm or a ...

Thanks and Thank you. I also Like this poem.

Its suppose to be a little off that's the way I want it to be there's reasons be hide it. Oh and Yes it's suppose to look like a letter ...

thanks