User avatar

jolene

Jolene

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Music Of War!

    male Can you hear the music of war?(emphasize) Outside my house residence door. Once it wasn't a chore to come to your door many times more. Now that there is ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Elizabeth Andrews school of the unknown - chapter one

    Hey it is me JO!!! The vast forest stretched for all the eye to see .The tall brown trees towered over the ground below them. The grass was yellow from ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Chop

    Chop Clunk “Five.” The best way to chop wood cleanly, in one swipe, is to go directly between two knots. Chop Clunk “Six.” Knots in the wood are what hold ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: By the Hands of a Wizard

    My wife was my own construction her parts found from different graves all of them putrid and dead I stiched stitched the head to the neck and then put together ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Two words were all I had. But I knew it was not enough. Three times you told me so, and I shall never forget. this reminds me of the old ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Golden Rose

    Thunder rolled over head. Dark storm clouds loomed over the old forest. Footsteps mashed intot he mud lead to a young girl running through the thick underbrush. What she was ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fighting Gods, saving lives and a bit of forbidden romance..

    Dylans POV i had no idea what i was doing, stood on the ships stage, at the camps end of year ball singing- can't fight this feeling, a song i ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: deleted

    Noooooooo! It is really good but I got a few Q's: "Dumb hick, Sanel muttered. Kasia shot him a derogatory look. smart. And he’s following something... Kasia strained herself to ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Vampire Love

    WHATZ UP KAYLA! I tjought the title to our story was ging to be thought the wall? What happened there?? Pm me if you can! Ps visit this website!

    May 18, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Muska

    Okay here is the review! The world was blured around me, the details fuzzy and bland. But everything closer to me---things such as my hands and my shoulders and the ...

    May 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Starting our Life Freshman Year

    Okay I got a little confused here: "Well I guess I'm a tinsy bit scared," She said "This is the first time really away from home for a long while."  ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Five

    'Okay we hafta walk about 100 feet back to the bend. That's where the deer came from." I started walking. It took a second for him to catch up. He ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: deleted

    ............Thats all?...*stunned*...wow that's sad...I like hoe you ended story like that! I makes me want to read more and more of It! I have one question thou...does he have super ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted

    I agree..the title doesn't fit the story at all! I think the plot was about her and him loving each other, but its hard to figure out... I also have ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sunkissed(2) rewrite: A old-fasioned teen pregancy

    Hey! I never posted anything on this one... My likes: It was a really good story. It has an Awsome was sweet that she cares for her friends. My dislike: ...

    May 7, 2010


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott