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Hi, I'm back online!! I really enjoyed this chapter, but I just have a few nitpicks: I know Mike wants to save his country, but he needs rest. I told ...

First off, nice poem!! I like how each stanza has a different subject, it definetely keeps me reading. I also do have a few nitpicks on this poem, though. I ...

Hi!! I thought this was a great poem! It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it. By the looks of it, it seems that this was your first ...

Hi!! I have really enjoyed this poem! It tells me that people should slow down to see the good parts of life. For example, if you slow down while taking ...

Hi!! Nice chapter! I have a few nitpicks to point out: "If we make it out here alive, would you go out with me." Instead of the period, you should ...

Hi! I have enjoyed another parody of "Let It Go". This was a funny parody of the internet. I did have a nitpick to point out: "why all these random ...

Can I just say that this is hilarious! I have been obsessed with this song and I think it is funny to see a parody of it. I think that ...

Hi!! I have enjoyed this book so far! It tells me that the army isn't all fun and games, it is a war. I have noticed a few mistakes that ...

Hi! This is an amazing start of this book. It made me feel very sad when I started reading. I found a mistake where it says: Witch I thought was ...

That was a very interesting chapter. I enjoyed reading about the witch and it had a lot of suspense. I noticed a few mistake, but one sentence didn't make sense: ...

Hey dogsrule5!! Nice start of your book! I really enjoyed all of the mythical creatures in this book. Also, you have to start a new paragraph when people are talking. ...

Can I say one thing. This was beautiful. I thought that it was amazing that you would like to be her whether she has dyslexia or not. Many people today ...