johnAsade

The first paragraph of this poem got me in the reading mood because it rhymed to some extent. And God knows i like rhyming poems! That is always the first ...

i had to leave a review.i have tour poems in the past, but his has been a first for me. Without trying so hard, the poem managed to reveal the ...

hi TheOneNamedZoe, everyone has noticed that punctuation mistake and i have to admit it is a careless mistake that changes everything. I intended to show how crazy the mother could ...

oh hi RS thanks for stopping by to review this story. For any mistakes, it must have been the speed i was using to get it posted. And now that ...

Hey there, TheSilverFox That is one honest yet reassuring review for a small story I thought would not mean much to anyone. Your comprehension of its small tidbits such as ...

A big thank you Junel for that rather helpful comment. And for pointing out the grammatical errors. That phrase was supposed to be "who i cant look at without feeling ...

Youre right, RadiantShadow!especially when it comes to additionally describing the setting. I realise it could have helped the reader understand the environment more. And yes, the lack of direct speec

thank you. again.

Thank you very much, OurManInHavana. This means the world to me. I will endeavor to add more dialog in my coming standalone stories.Would you like to check out the rest ...

this is really long, but well..... grammar errors like this one 'I recognize quick easily' are easy to notice. i like that you are bold enough to use that tense ...

Thats okay,AshleyDashley. Am sure you have a lot more lyrics to show off, and i cant wait to eat them up!

"...soft as butter...". loved that bit. This piece is short enough for me to take in one read, and interesting enough to get me imagining what it really was like. ...

Its my first review, and i hope you can sense my wonder at having to find my first story written in the tense i admire the most. Its well written ...