jinx

Interesting story, definately unique! Nice description in the starting paragraph, it drew me in, so I wanted to read more. i loved the depth of the story.

i loved the plot. i really loved the originality and the choice of words. the flow to words was really good. keep up the good work

i really enjoyed reading the story. ....................the flow of words was really good. nice choice of words................i would definitely be waiting for more of it....... keep up the good work

i am a great fan of dancers because i love to dance.... nice poem.... i really liked it........... you captured the emotions well........

i loved it....... the flow of words was amazing...... the love was rightly captured in words......

i loved the story...... you have captured the emotions well.... i love the flow of writing....... i would definitely like to read more of it......

i loved the poem.........i love the flow........the passion of the dancers is well put into words

nice theme........keep trying

i liked the poem .........its elegiac, profound......i guess you have wrote it with full of feelings ........but the lyrical flow broke towards the end.........the end could be a little better........

i like the story...i love the flow......you have beautiful choice of words....ya , its true i felt like reading a letter......but try cutting out short paragraphs.

very touching................heartbreaking, poignant story.....i loved the would be more beautiful if you can make the story a little more longer