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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Reign Draft 1 Chapter 1

    Jimss here Whores, brothels, violence, oh my. That's a recipe for some good stuff. (At least to me. Can't speak for everyone) Ok, time to slide my opinion on in ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Account of the Gods Chapter 1: Dissonance

    jimss here Hi, Chalklot. I have no other way to say this, but this review probably won't be very pleasant. I am sorry, but I have a job a reviewer ...

    Feb 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 21 ~ The Dream Felistia

    Jimss here Heyo felistia, My name is jimss, and I am going to pop on in here a give my two cents about your work if that's ok. Dragons. I ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Still Stone - two. (part one.)

    Jimss here Heya Quill. Mind if I do a review? Disclaimer: You know the routine. Here for your work not for you and so on. Let's get into it. I'll ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evil's Affection: Chapter 1

    Jimss here Heyo! So I saw your rating and just knew I had to take a gander. Most of my stuff has that content rating, so I was naturally intrigued. ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Jimss here Hey! So, I'm not sure if I have done for you before, so I'll do my intro spiel. I'm here for your work, not for you. I want ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Thørn 2 (The Myriad book 1)

    Jimss here Hey Feltrix, me again. Ready for another bad review? (I know I am) I think I already put my customary disclaimer on one of your works, so I'll ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Bright Side: Excerpt

    Jimss here How ya doin? I'm Jimss, and I'm a jack***. That about it. So I'm gonna start with what I say every time: I'm here for your work, not ...

    Feb 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 1

    Jimss here Hi, Falconer. By glancing over your bio, I can tell you are a veteran to this site, so if you don't mind, I'm gonna try to do a ...

    Feb 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Admirer

    Jimss here Hi there coehl. My name is Jimss. I do reviews. Short work, quick review. That's how it is. SO, you're 14 right? Ah to be young again. (Don't ...

    Feb 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Still Stone - one.

    Jimss here Yo, I'm Jimss. Right off the bat let me say that I am neither a great reviewer nor exceptionally knowledgeable when it comes to the finer points of ...

    Feb 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Maria Prologue Part 1

    Jimss here I see that you are new here so let me just say; welcome to the YWS. My name is jimss, and I rather enjoy doing reviews, especially novels ...

    Feb 15, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Review Re: Peace Through Strength

    Jimss here Hi there captinace44. I'm Jimss and I pride myself on honest reviews, even if it sometimes makes me a jack*** (which it does). I call myself the neighborhood ...

    Feb 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Richard & Rebecca: Chapter Two -Spatial Irises-

    Jimss here Last one before your mass edit. I think I've exhausted all my introductions so I'll get right to it. One thing, do you live in Europe or Stateside? ...

    Feb 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Phyrza Prologue (The Myriad book 1)

    Jimss here First off, welcome to YWS. I'm new here as well so I hope that my comments can be of some help. Small disclaimer. I'm not good at gauging ...

    Feb 15, 2017


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