jayleighsmith

Hey there! Read this and just had to tell you how cute I think it is. Might just be the rhythm being very sing-song... Anyways. I'll do a quick review ...

Hey there. So, I guess I'll do a review for you this evening. Give me some slack since I've been in hiatus for two years from here. It takes me ...

Hello, I'm Jayleigh. Alright so I didn't read your first chapter but I think I'm going to go do that. But before I go there are a few things I'd ...

Hello. I hope you are having a fabulous day. I've had the history channel on all day as background noise to whatever it is that I've been up to and ...

Hello again. I've got to say, this poem may just be better than the last one I read. However, there are a few points that I stopped and thought, "Noooo! ...

Good evening! I'm Jayleigh and I'm going to help as best I can to better your writing. First short story? I know it can be a little difficult. I've had ...

Hello there. You read my chapter so I will read yours. I hope you have a lovely day and do not take any offence to what I am about to ...

Hi. It's kind of late for me and I have to get up stupid early tomorrow, so I'm not one hundred percent that you'll come out of this review with ...

Hi. Dustan looked around, the thick smoke choked his lungs and his eyes burned like fire. Comma splice. Glancing to his left a man erupted into flames that engulfed his ...

Hello there, Subtle. I'll be your reviewer this evening. We've got a lot to cover so here we go. As far as random statements go: -Personally, I feel that you ...

Hello. My name is Jayleigh and I'll be reviewing for you this evening. I'm rusty with reviewing but I had some free time so I figured I'd stop by. Here ...

usually spot, Usual effect on me Period. “Are you tired babe?” 'tired COMMA babe' “No, no….,” No need for a comma here. Something was holding me back from say ’my ...

Hello, I'm Jayleigh. I realize that this is a bit old, but since it was lacking in many reviews, I thought I'd take a look. (Also, it seemed interesting.) “I ...

Hello. My name is Jayleigh. Now that introductions are good and done with, off to the reviewing. This is a set alone piece of work. Personally, I feel like you'd ...

experience. Like I think it is safe to say that you can use a ; here. Since, like, who ends a sentence so abruptly? 17 year old. I know it ...