jayflames1

Political party whale?

"Dress how I wanna dress.... and let the words fall out. Honestly. Honestly I can't breath... etc. Just kidding though

Ihanks, especially for the title change. I think I fixed them.

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The food is cooked with the hopes that it won't be to salty this time too salty, not to. Probably just a typo. My bags are packed the bus ticket ...

well someone had to say it.

YOU CAN GO YOUR OWN WAY

great piece, scientifically correct too, people with worse handwriting commonly are that way because they have too many ideas going through their head. You probably knew that though and that's ...

thanks (:

... Are you sure?

Thanks for the review, I thought it might be a bit much so I waws waiting if other people thought so. Really good review though, thanks!

Thanks!

I checked with 3 people... They lied to me

The huge paragraph was meaningful to me

For the changes part "I'm guessing you meant *changes" I meant will make not a lot of people view things differently.