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Alright Icaruss, I'm here to help, since your review deprived. Haha. Okay. So at first the dialog kind of confused me. I couldnt really make out who was speaking. Easy ...

Okay Mr. andrew lets see whatcha got for me. Sorry this took so long, I was watching Jeff Dunham on comedy central. He is hilarious dontcha think? I read what ...

This is really...deep? If that's the right word to use. I see that you have basically pointed out all of the common flaws in girls these days. What with self ...

Sorry if this took me a little while, you kind of messaged me at a bad time. I finished my homework but it's dinner time. haha. Okay here we go ...

Oh my gosh! I love this. Very talented writing right here. I love how you used each of the characters as the narrators. Somthing tells me that it's going to ...

Hello. I don't want to come off as a stalker but I'm just overly helpful haha! Okay, I'm not sure if you were told, but the main idea of this ...

phew finally got done with half of my homework! Time to take a quick review break, haha. This is excited but short....grr! haha I just want to know whats really ...

Merry!! I am so sorry. I fell asleep last night before I got the chance to review it!!!!!!!! Gah! I shall redeem myself...yeah idk. Okay I'm in one of those ...

Ello, Ello again! Sha boom sha boom!!! ahahaha!!! Immature moment there :smt003 Okay okay Back to topic here. Before I even start, your paragraphs are ginormous!!! haha. Usually a new ...

Sorry this took me so long! This was quite short but just as many nit-picks...odd. Quick question before I forget. What happened to Jackson? Haha? okay here I go!!! I ...

So, I see we are switching back to modern times. Sweet!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~ We die, and live, and live and live and just keep on "living". haha, love this!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~ He ...

SOOOO I noticed you posted part three and I was like OMG OMG OMG...then I realized that uhm I hadn't read part two I'm going to read it, I might ...

Hello. Sorry this took me so long, my dad kept interrupting me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can never refuse a vampire novel...I'm addicted to them. Haha. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My name is Calla, I ...

hello. :D Over all, I think it's going places. A couple things caught my attention, first was how Walker just up and knew what happened with her father, how did ...

Oh. I didn't realize you already posted up chapter two. Okay, as someone said before me that this sounds similar to Twilight. Been there, done that. I'm hoping that you ...