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Re: Little Lines For Santa
You missed capitalizing an "I". Other than that I loved it. Great poem. The rhyme was great, not unnatural like it can sometimes be. Not too rhymey, just right. I ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Just Another Love Scene That May Never Happen Again
I loved it. Yeah, the formatting was off, but whatevs. I loved that you put the bit about scars in there. I clicked on this and went "oh man. this ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Mind over Me
LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE First of all, I love the point you're making, of putting yourself down, hating yourself for hating yourself, that type of stuff. It was beautifully put together, with the ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Tears of a broken record
I love, love, love this. (the people complaining about the abstractedness of the section about the bystander just seem shallow to me.) In my eyes, you're saying you created you're ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Saints.
Loved it! There were a few typos, but whatever. You probably already know that, and it isn't a big deal. I loved the plot. It really got me interested from ...
Sep 18, 2013