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Re: Loneliness is not that bad
Hi shoaib! :) Loneliness is a relative thing. Some might equate being alone (not the cliche type) with being lonely. Some might say a life without meaning is a life ...
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Re: House of Traps
Hi harris141195! This is an interesting poem! It reminds me of the Saw series, you know, the man with the jigsaw wound? :) I had a good time reading this. ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Crap, I think I love you.
Hi retrodisco666! :) You did a great job writing this poem. If Chris was a real person, then I hope you get that person (I'm not sure whether Chris is ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: love....<3 its beautiful!
Hello ab2heaven! :) I guess you've been writing your heart out lately, huh? Yes. Love is, and always will be, beautiful. Love is the most wonderful thing one can have. ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Dancing
Hi QuillFlame22995! Nice poem! :) (Hypothetical high five!) I think you're a great writer. Different writers have different styles but I think not all styles are effective - and I ...
Apr 19, 2014 -
Re: Sense
Hi luckystarz6090! :) This poem, despite being aesthetically nonsense, is trying to convince its readers that what the message that its trying to convey actually makes sense. I'm not a ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet of a untrusting lover.
Hi, retrodisco666! :) Yay! I love writing love poems too! :) It's a great love poem by the way; quite inspiring, don't you think? (Because I'm the lovey dovey type) ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Vortex
Hi, BitterRosemary! :) Through your work, I can feel some emotional quality attached to it. Is this based on a personal experience? :) I feel like the speaker in this ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Hi Crimsona. :) Nice work. Great use of imagery. I like how I visualize images of blood, skin, and glass as I read this poem. As ashams123 said, you did ...
Apr 17, 2014
