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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Loneliness is not that bad

    Hi shoaib! :) Loneliness is a relative thing. Some might equate being alone (not the cliche type) with being lonely. Some might say a life without meaning is a life ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: House of Traps

    Hi harris141195! This is an interesting poem! It reminds me of the Saw series, you know, the man with the jigsaw wound? :) I had a good time reading this. ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Crap, I think I love you.

    Hi retrodisco666! :) You did a great job writing this poem. If Chris was a real person, then I hope you get that person (I'm not sure whether Chris is ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love....<3 its beautiful!

    Hello ab2heaven! :) I guess you've been writing your heart out lately, huh? Yes. Love is, and always will be, beautiful. Love is the most wonderful thing one can have. ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Dancing

    Hi QuillFlame22995! Nice poem! :) (Hypothetical high five!) I think you're a great writer. Different writers have different styles but I think not all styles are effective - and I ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Sense

    Hi luckystarz6090! :) This poem, despite being aesthetically nonsense, is trying to convince its readers that what the message that its trying to convey actually makes sense. I'm not a ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet of a untrusting lover.

    Hi, retrodisco666! :) Yay! I love writing love poems too! :) It's a great love poem by the way; quite inspiring, don't you think? (Because I'm the lovey dovey type) ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Vortex

    Hi, BitterRosemary! :) Through your work, I can feel some emotional quality attached to it. Is this based on a personal experience? :) I feel like the speaker in this ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Hi Crimsona. :) Nice work. Great use of imagery. I like how I visualize images of blood, skin, and glass as I read this poem. As ashams123 said, you did ...

    Apr 17, 2014


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines