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Re: beyond, the storms are fizzy dust
I've never been one for sonnet writing, but I really found this to be super simple, sweet and clean. You used the right formula, but what I want to focus ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: The Womb
First off, I seem to see you everywhere - in case if you didn't know, I'm also "Rosi Willard" on WtW. I was so glad to see your work on ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: Pad Jumps
This is absolutely perfect - I think you're talking about two things, maybe Frogger - an old game where you have to jump from lily pad to lily pad to ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: earl grey tea with a dash of honey
..This is just- okay, I'm not a tea-drinker, in fact I don't even like tea, but this..poem made me want it. Okay, okay, that's not the point. I love that ...
Jan 13, 2021 -
Re: inconsistent temperature
I'm not sure what this poem is meant to talk about, but hey, I'll try my best, yeah? I think this is meant to talk about the tumultous mess that ...
Jan 13, 2021 -
Re: shutting down internal server
Okay, I missed out on a pivotal part of my childhood by never playing Minecraft, but here comes a review. I love the lowercase lettering, and the formatting, that's pretty ...
Jan 9, 2021 -
Re: Forgiveness vs. Acceptance
I saw this in the Green Room and thought it looked interesting, so I took a peek. I'm not used to reading personal memoirs, but this struck me in a ...
Jan 9, 2021 -
Re: Anime And Animated Reviews
AS AN AVID SIMPSON FAN I WHEEZED AT THAT BART QUOTE - HE'S LITERALLY MY SPIRIT ANIMAL, OH MY GOD. Now for the actual review. - I agree wholeheartedly with ...
Jan 7, 2021 -
Re: In remembrance of @silvermoon17 💜
I'm so sorry that you had to go through this pain - I know this is a sensitive topic, obviously, but I found there to be beauty within the sadness. ...
Jan 7, 2021 -
Re: the greatest love
This is so...serene and soft. I love when people write of any sort of parental relationship, and you hit the nail on the head with this one. Like I said, ...
Jan 7, 2021 -
Re: Paradise Part 1 [REVISED]
Oooh, I really don't know how to start off with this, rather than I just got a lot of stuff thrown at me, lol. I wasn't sure what the setting ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: So this is Heartbreak
I'm really sorry this happened to you. I've been pretty inactive on here, but I want to start off this review by saying that really, really sucks. But, on the ...
Jan 6, 2021 -
Re: i don’t like myself
I know how you feel. For the past couple of months (I guess it's better now) I dealt with restrictive eating, and thought I was happy with the results. That ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: Prisoner
It's always sad when a marriage decays, and I think you captured it pretty well. I especially found it interesting that the character whom this piece is based around seems ...
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: Winter train
I'm not exactly sure as to what Lo-fi is, but I sure did like this poem. I found this to be really interesting in the sense that a lot of ...
Dec 3, 2020
