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  • Poetry » General, Satire
    Re: beyond, the storms are fizzy dust

    I've never been one for sonnet writing, but I really found this to be super simple, sweet and clean. You used the right formula, but what I want to focus ...

    Mar 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual
    Re: The Womb

    First off, I seem to see you everywhere - in case if you didn't know, I'm also "Rosi Willard" on WtW. I was so glad to see your work on ...

    Mar 16, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Pad Jumps

    This is absolutely perfect - I think you're talking about two things, maybe Frogger - an old game where you have to jump from lily pad to lily pad to ...

    Mar 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic
    Re: earl grey tea with a dash of honey

    ..This is just- okay, I'm not a tea-drinker, in fact I don't even like tea, but this..poem made me want it. Okay, okay, that's not the point. I love that ...

    Jan 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: inconsistent temperature

    I'm not sure what this poem is meant to talk about, but hey, I'll try my best, yeah? I think this is meant to talk about the tumultous mess that ...

    Jan 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: shutting down internal server

    Okay, I missed out on a pivotal part of my childhood by never playing Minecraft, but here comes a review. I love the lowercase lettering, and the formatting, that's pretty ...

    Jan 8, 2021

  • Other » General, General
    Re: Forgiveness vs. Acceptance

    I saw this in the Green Room and thought it looked interesting, so I took a peek. I'm not used to reading personal memoirs, but this struck me in a ...

    Jan 8, 2021

  • Other » Review, Other
    Re: Anime And Animated Reviews

    AS AN AVID SIMPSON FAN I WHEEZED AT THAT BART QUOTE - HE'S LITERALLY MY SPIRIT ANIMAL, OH MY GOD. Now for the actual review. - I agree wholeheartedly with ...

    Jan 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: In remembrance of @silvermoon17 💜

    I'm so sorry that you had to go through this pain - I know this is a sensitive topic, obviously, but I found there to be beauty within the sadness. ...

    Jan 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic
    Re: the greatest love

    This is so...serene and soft. I love when people write of any sort of parental relationship, and you hit the nail on the head with this one. Like I said, ...

    Jan 7, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Paradise Part 1 [REVISED]

    Oooh, I really don't know how to start off with this, rather than I just got a lot of stuff thrown at me, lol. I wasn't sure what the setting ...

    Jan 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: So this is Heartbreak

    I'm really sorry this happened to you. I've been pretty inactive on here, but I want to start off this review by saying that really, really sucks. But, on the ...

    Jan 6, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: i don’t like myself

    I know how you feel. For the past couple of months (I guess it's better now) I dealt with restrictive eating, and thought I was happy with the results. That ...

    Dec 3, 2020

  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic
    Re: Prisoner

    It's always sad when a marriage decays, and I think you captured it pretty well. I especially found it interesting that the character whom this piece is based around seems ...

    Dec 3, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Winter train

    I'm not exactly sure as to what Lo-fi is, but I sure did like this poem. I found this to be really interesting in the sense that a lot of ...

    Dec 3, 2020


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray