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I really liked your poem! Especially the part where it's like " all the best memories require a little pain." Great work! Keep it up :)

Thank you so much, your review was very helpful and I'll try to do the changes as soon as possible because in most of them, you are right! Oh and ...

oh my god!! i cant even describe how true this is! Happens every single time. I love your style in writing. it's different and very special. keep up the awesome ...

Hey!Thank you so much and I know it's weird but it doesn't have a constant chorus, its the parts that have "how could you" and it's different words but the ...

it has a great meaning behind it. I love the part where its like "On this ship, there is love to hide. People hiding from those who lied. This is ...

Amazing poem!I think the whole idea of the "Thunder" is really unique, its showing how even we cant control our inner thunder. I can really relate to that. perfectly written!

Thank you so much for your review I'm going to fix these things. This was one of the first few songs/poems I have written I expected to have a lot ...

thank you so much!