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Thanks :)

Thanks for your useful review. Will surely make corrections :)

Your confusion about the pebble sentence is absolutely justified as that was my mistake, I'll correct it :) And just by the way, this piece was of humor genre so ...

Hey! Thank you so much for the great review! It is really helpful :) And yeah, YJHD is the Indian movie Yeh Jawani Hai Deewani :)

Thankyou for the review and corrections :D

I don't remember now but I still guess I did. Maybe it was for a short while or something

Is it just me or is there actually irony in this poem?

I've read many short horror stories, but this one is remarkable. Well written!

I understand that you don't believe in yourself. But you must believe in your story! Or else you won't o justice to it :)

Hey, thanks a lot! And that slap in the face message for those judgemental people who like to bring others down, and not my readers in general :D

Do invite me someday :')

You can build your own one day and run wherever you want

I can't get myself to review this one. Some poems are beyond any literary mistakes , reaching high above with an aesthetic value :")

Hey SnazzyPencil, Firstly, let me tell you that you've written an amazingly beautiful poem. The concept, the idea, the thought process, everything is just perfect. Your poem had many colors, ...

Hey Deanie, Firstly, my wishes are with your aunt. This poem is really touching and inspiring. I just wish you could have put that note in the end because after ...