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Re: Defiance of truth.
This personal account is really emotional and touching. All of us go through this phase at some point in our lives and it is important to move ahead without looking ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: Why?
The message you are trying to give through this poem is great and you've brought it out in a pretty simple way, keeping the emotion intact. One thing that confused ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: Walls
Hey, I really liked this short write-up. The fact that you've kept it simple makes it easy to grasp the emotion you're trying to portray. And yes, this is a ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: when separation is what destined
Hey, I really like the sonnet. Even though it portrayed the pang of separation, it had a refreshing feel unusual from the depressing sonnets of love and separation. Keep writing ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Flatlining
By the time I realized where the ending was headed, I was already crying with you. I know how it feels to lose a loved one. But hey, be strong. ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: The Rich Witch
I like your honesty. It's nothing embarrassing though. Everyone's first poem is silly. But hey, remember poetic liberty! You can be silly in your portrayal of an idea. I have ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: We All Shouted Terrorist. We All Hated Them.
Heart-halting. I highly appreciate the dramatic irony of the story. The way you brought out two corresponding accounts of the worst attack ( not only on American soil ) is ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: To Envy Or Not To Envy
Oh God. This is one of the best poems I have read in this society. You precisely highlighted the life of poets. While the world envies their words, it is ...
May 18, 2015
