irishnavygirl

It is deep. However, I failed to see the point of mentioning the sweatshirt. It made me think deeper, but I still found no point. That's just me.

Very touching. You made a valid point that not many people think about and realize. Great job!

Okay... this poem had potential, but you described one dress then described another. It seemed very choppy and all over the place. Try to keep it less kryptic though.

I liked it a lot. However, I think you should go a little more in depth with your feelings and provide more imagery and posibly some metaphors. And do go ...

I really enjoyed the poem. Sometimes things aren't meant to make sense; especially at two am. However, this was really well thought out and I liked it a lot!!!

This was an amazing poem! It grabbed my attention right away, and I immediately understood and related. Well done!