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No guarantees.

Ah, I think you flagged me. I supposed that's fair. Fag is meant to be ambiguous, meaning cigarette. Thanks for the feedback. ;)

visage triste :c je voulais le lire.

Hello perseus! I'll begin by saying ditto to Kafka's feedback. It's on par with my thoughts on this. I would however say that "hip" works for me. As the opening ...

Hello Persy! This is a terrific short piece. My only real advice would be to scratch the third line.

Terrific stuff, Audy! All I can offer is go easy on some of the adjectives and take some of Karzkin's advice.

Dude this sucks. Lol, Snoink, he actually didn't spell anything incorrectly. Actually, he did.

I don't have any problems with people being gay...I really don't But unfortunately, I don't believe anyone is "born gay". With that kind of irrational logic pedophiles can easily claim ...

Did someone say free music? Thanks Lumi. :)

Correct usage the possessive form of the pronoun "it" is "its" without the the apostrophe. Don't worry, it's a common mistake. Keep it up.

I started a French course this year but I'm not competent enough to give you a review worthy of the name. I would suggest dropping a link in the French ...

Not sure I'm grasping the winter's night simile, but overall this is a charming poem. I'll come back for more, perhaps. :)

Are you trying to imitate a stutter?

Reminds me of the fake tweets from the pope in a recent New Yorker. I could see this catching on.

@ryan: I'd liken it to both Camus and Sartre, neither of which are poets. The rest I'll say in a PM, the appropriate mode of communication when replying to a ...