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Why on Earth would you attempt such a ballsy thing, Lord Anzius? :p You cannot quantify supernatural entities. If that were true, then the scientific community would be able to ...

Oh my god! This is a breathtaking poem. Your story telling is top notch. The anonymous drunken couple kept me so entertained. Your daring depiction of the events that took ...

Terrific poetry! Something fresh indeed, a dark twist on a love poem. Please excuse me I'm going to try out a new format for reviewing your poem. :wink: + I ...

A/N: I wrote almost 50 haiku/haikus/haiki during my trip to Thailand, and these are some of my favourites. As you can probably see, a lot of them are strongly inspired ...

Psychologically pitch perfect. I absolutely loved your approach. It felt as if you wrote this brilliant prose and then poetically enhanced it. It was artistic in every sense. Thank you ...

Judging by your avatar, I'm going to assume this poem is inspired by the latest Alice movie. I haven't seen it yet so I wont be able to really take ...

This still needs some work, so tear it apart. Nature of Man To take something from someone that they love so much, I would remove the comma here, no need ...

A/N: Another experimentation. I'm not quite sure it was successful but it definitely challenged my way of looking at poetry. (Title is subject to change) - My aim was to ...

Everyone else pretty much said any good criticism that I could've. Excellent first poem! Work on your vocab too, if need be a thesaurus is a great tool. Most of ...

Interesting poem! The philosophical themes are great. I've studied the philosophy of art and beauty and I like the way you question what art is so purely. I've also been ...

I really enjoyed reading your poem! Good use of allusions and parallel structure. :D Needs some improvement in punctuation but I think you know that. The title is interesting but ...

I really like this poem! What I enjoy is trying to figure out what you could be describing. Good personificatoin of whatever it is though! :D Need a space after ...

You get what you pay for at BK. I'm not going to crit, this by the way. Seeing as it's a joke. Unless you were really trying for some satire ...

I love the way you’re out of this world A wise man, twisting theories in your mind I love the way your eyes twinkle When you turn into a reckless ...

Enthralling! The beginning was pure tranquility and then, "it leapt"! Your dramatic change in tone was very well timed and kept me interested. I also appreciate your refrain from dialogue ...