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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Cedar Ravine: 3.2

    I very nearly forgot your reminder about this chapter being up, but I'm so glad I didn't! Without further ado, let's get into it! Syntax-wise, I didn't find much wrong ...

    Mar 4, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: Chapter 11 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey, lelu! Inky here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's get into it! Unfortunately, I don't know what happened in the chapter before this one, but I ...

    Feb 25, 2018

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Gypsy Girl

    hey lelu! Inky here for a review today, so let's get to it! Your first paragraph is very choppy, you only have one long sentence, and I think the paragraph ...

    Feb 23, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Cedar Ravine: 3.1

    Hey, rosette! Inky here to leave a startlingly timely review, so let's get right to it! I don't want to know about them. I don't care about them. And I ...

    Feb 15, 2018

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: My Weakness, My Strength [Part 1]

    Hey Mea! Inky here for a (hopefully) Olympics worthy review, so let's jump right in! I was laying on a padded surface, each beat of my heart pumping loudly again ...

    Feb 9, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Cedar Ravine: 2.3

    Hey, rosette! So sorry for forgetting about this and leaving you hanging. Without further ado, let's dive in! "Madison!" Hannah sounded appalled. "You can't just say that! That's so rude!" ...

    Feb 7, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: Chapter 6 - Monsters of the Night

    Hey, Murphy2493! Inky here for a review for the Red Pandas! Be warned that I have no prior knowledge of this story, so if I mess up, I'm sorry. “I’d ...

    Jan 28, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 8 of Princess of the Sea

    Hello lelu! Inky here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's hear it for the Red Pandas! Silira's feet were flying along the canal steps, watching the sea. ...

    Jan 28, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Autumn Chapter 2

    Hey, CocoaCat! Happy Review Day! Let's get another review in for the Red Pandas! Koda's stomach swelled with pups; her voice dull with exhaustion. Chip and Lightning scampered into the ...

    Jan 28, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Autumn Chapter 1

    Hey, CocoaCat! Inky here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's get a review in for the Red Pandas! "Come on Dapple, you can do it." The Alpha ...

    Jan 27, 2018

  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: the ceiling is her new sky

    Yo Dulcet! Inky here to leave a review for the Red Pandas! I think that this could have been a really good exercise in description, but you didn't really take ...

    Jan 27, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Mage and the Immortal Chapter 15

    Hey, Thundahguy! Happy Review Day! Let's hear it for the Red Pandas! I've not read anything before this chapter, so forgive me if I make bad assumptions. I'll try to ...

    Jan 27, 2018

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic
    Re: The One That Got Away

    Hey, ImeldaMargoth! Inky here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's get some points for the Red Pandas! The first thing I noticed is that you need to ...

    Jan 27, 2018

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Jotunheim

    Hiya SpaceSnickerdoodle! Inky here for a review, so let's get to it! The wind was strong, icy and sharp as a blade as it whipped the silky grass to and ...

    Jan 24, 2018


  • Hey, Mentaku! Inky here for a review, so let's get into it! It was a cold day for me. I had just experienced a great loss and then while reflecting ...

    Jan 22, 2018


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