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Hey, Castor. Storm here for a review (like I said I would do) so let's jump right into it and hope I touch on a few good points! i told ...

Hey, Ineedy0u. Storm here for a review, so let's jump straight into it! Disclaimer: I'm going to be very harsh. Don't take it personally; I just want you to improve ...

Hey, Child! Last chapter posted, phew! Let's jump into the good stuff! FYI: This is probably going to be a wall of text, but I'll try to break it up ...

Hey Child. I'm almost done catching up on your chapters. *pause for applause* Yay! Anywhen, let's jump into it. The wind had gotten cold, Be wary of weak adjectives. I'm ...

Hey, Child! I'm trying to catch up on reviewing this, so here goes nothing. He dropped his club, gargling, legs folding under him. I think gurgling would be a better ...

Hey Bisc! Storm here to do a review like promised, so let's jump right into it! Since, I'm not totally familiar with your plot or characters, I'm going to focus ...

Hey anonymousplease! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! The first thing I noticed, was your overuse of adverbs. Here's a good example: The moon ...

Hey RVS! Storm here to fill your review request, so let's jump right into it. The notes he played had no melody, yet his audience was enthralled. What does this ...

Hello SugarApple! Storm's here for a review, so let's jump right into it. I sat facing the old man, tapping my pen on the wooden table to get his attention. ...

Hey, sapphireluna! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it. I will review this with the fact that this is meant to be character development in ...

Hey, pkidchick! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it. I just want to say this to share good music, but your title reminds me of ...

Hey ChildOfNowhere! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! just a soft, solid light beige carpet, Woah, bit of an overload on the adjectives. I'm ...

Hey, RossLighting! Storm here to do a review, so let's just jump right into it! Okay, I must begin by wondering why you would write a story about Richard Nixon. ...

Hey, ChildOfNowhere! Storm's here for a (long overdue) review, so let's jump right into it. I do want to say that in the first chapter, I wasn't particularly impressed with ...

Hey, RossLighting! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! I first have to note your formatting. I can't imagine you intended for it to be ...