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Hey, Thundahguy! I'm back for another review, so let's get into it! One of the main problems I'm seeing pop up is that you describe in too many words. It's ...

Hey! Ink here to hold up my end of the bargain, so let's get to it! First, I have a few nitpicks. The two were both weak from exhaustion and ...

Her ShadowVyper! Ink here to hold up my end of the bargain, so let's get to it! Just so you know, I have a step-sister named Jerica, so I'm probably ...

Whoops, I didn't get to this before 4 other people did, but I hope this review is still helpful! I can't find anything truly wrong with your first few paragraphs, ...

Hey, Eros! Ink here to punt this from the Green Room for Review Day, so let's get to it! The very first thing I noticed was the sheer number of ...

Hey! Ink here to knock this outta the Green Room for Review Day, so let's get to it! I haven't read the previous chapters of this, so I'll tend to ...

Hey, dwyn! I enjoyed your first chapter, so I decided to review this regularly! Let's get into it. Her old bedroom surrounded her. This is probably a bit nitpicky, but ...

Hey, manilla! Would you believe that this is the first time I've ever reviewed your work. That's a mistake on my part! First things first, I really like your title, ...

Hey, dywn! Ink here to knock this outta the Green Room, so let's get started. I think you have some good bones for a great first paragraph, but a few ...

Yo, Adri! This is probably not going to be a super long review (I'm not @Hattable), but I hope my thoughts help regardless. This felt very rough. Particularly in your ...

Heya, rosette! Ink here for another review, so let's jump into it! I'm seeing a lot of short, choppy paragraphs. Usually, I'm a fan of short paragraphs because they make ...

Yo, Adri! Since I've been following this anyway, I'm just going to go ahead and boot this from the Green Room and hopefully give you more of my in-depth thoughts ...

Hey, rosette! Storm here for a review, so let's get into it! I'm trying something new. Usually, I review as I read, but this time, I've already read it. Tell ...

Hey, rosette! Ink here for another review (two in one day, who would've thought?). So let's get to it! The air conditioning was humming loudly inside Taco Bell. Yuck! I'm ...

I totally missed this chapter! I'm sorry, but let's get to it now. First things first, your beginning paragraph was a bit choppy. You had a fragment, and I think ...