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Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 2.1
Hey, Mea! Storm here for another review, so let's get straight into it! The girl’s sat up, looking around wildly for the source of the voice. When her gaze settled ...
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: The Ballad of the Brenerit Curfew - Chapter 1
Hey Bisc! Storm here for a review. (I was actually going to review Mea's story but then I saw this and you're one of my favorite people here, so I ...
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 1
Hi, Mea! Storm here for a review for RevMo! I'm going to be blazing through this, so be expecting a lot of reviews from me. She turned back to her ...
Sep 5, 2017 -
Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1
Yo, sae (I'm just going to use that because there's less chances of spelling errors.) Storm here to review. I saw that the other ones were a bit short, so ...
Aug 19, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 9.2
Hey Bisc! Storm here to review your long awaited chapter, so let's jump right into it! She’d gone quiet, but if she was awake, she wasn’t saying anything. Was there ...
Aug 7, 2017 -
Re: Chapter One (The Mate Between Brothers)
Hey, BaileyMatwiiw! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! A bump in the road caused Oakley to be flung forward and forced to look up from ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: Three, Two, One
Hey, lolosboing! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. Laise stared at the grimy glass mirror in front of him. 'Glass' is an unnecessary adjective in ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Daily Stories - Part 3
Phew, your long chapters are taking a lot out of me. Maybe if you split them up into something like Part 3.1 and part 3.2 you might attract reviewers more ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Daily Stories - Part 2
Hey, Dino! Storm here for another review, so let's jump right into it! It had been a week since Oliver moved in and when Harper woke up on a Monday ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Daily Stories - Part 1
Hey Dino! Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it! One evening, while she was working her boring job, a wallaby with mint ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Cursed Companies String from the Family
Hey, atticAesthetic! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Her pupils were small balls, like the sun in the middle of the ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 9.1
Hey Bisc! Happy Review Day! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Or, they would be, had you taken Camillo out of the equation. There's a ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 8.2
Hey Bisc! Storm here to finally get to your review, so let's jump right into it! You see why driving was so important to Christina? NOOOOOOO! You broke the 4th ...
Jul 24, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 8.1
Hey, Bisc! Storm here for a surprisingly on time review, so let's get right into it! I could hear bright, happy notes in my head when I thought about the ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 7.2
So I am actual trash; sorry for making you wait this long. Anywhen, let's get into it! "In an ice bath, nursing his injured foot?" I resisted adding, Where do ...
Jul 13, 2017