indigochild1991

Hello again! Again, an enjoyable piece. The only thing I would say is that I think you could maybe have some more description throughout? Maybe that wasn't your intention, and ...

Hello there! I enjoyed reading this. It was sweet and enjoyable. I heard your idea being called a 'cliche', and I'd just like to say that I don't find it ...

Wow1 This is chilling, creepy, and twisted, with lots of darkness throughout. It's also a brilliantly wrotten piece and you certainly have a way with words here. It seems to ...

Hello! I have to say, to begin, that I throughly enjoyed your piece. Long, but certainly worth it. I like your use of humour throughout. Some of the lines of ...

This seems like a brilliant idea, and one that I will certainly read more of when you post more. Will you pm me when you do post some more? I ...

Hey there! I personally think that your story needs more description of the characters-it helps the reader to imagine them as being real, and helps them to want to find ...

Hello there!! I'll begin by saying that the fast-paced, action style that you have here is very engaging, and keeps the reader interested, but di try to make sure you ...

I really love this poem. It's beautiful, emotional and simple. When I say simple, I mean in a good way. It is clear and beautifully comprehensible with lots of genuine ...

I loved this! People say that I am too naieve about life, so it's good to know there are other out there who feel the way that I do!! All ...

Hello!! I like your idea, the origina but still sort of classic if that makes sense! The only things I would say on the negative side is that maybe you ...

Hello!! Although I love this as I have loved the others, I think you could describe the scene of the accident a lot more. In saying that, however, your use ...

Hello again!! Oooh I like it!! Great work again! One little thing (although I accept this could be completely personal) is that it would be great for Life to be ...

Hello! This is a brilliant, original idea. However, I think that in some parts you could be a bit more creative-I agree with what was said earlier about the generic ...

Hello!! I love your plot line-classic! You have quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I can see that people have already pointed those out! Your characterisation is ...

This is such a pretty poem!!! It's lovely. I don't really know the greatest amount about poem structure and that, but I really did like your structure. Your use of ...