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Wow, I really liked this! It was a lot darker than most of your work, but it felt more personal and deep. It gave me shivers at the end. It ...

Hey there :) I really liked this poem. It's simple tone fits it perfectly, and I like how it feels almost like a letter. There was only one small error ...

I really liked the beginning of this poem, but I think that it faded a bit at the end. The first line really drew me in, and I wanted to ...

Hey there, I really liked this poem. I think that it's my favorite of yours so far, at least out of the ones that I've seen. It flowed really nicely, ...

Hey there :) I liked this, and I think that you should continue it. The storyline seems origional and interesting. There are just a few things that you could work ...

Hey there, Poem here. Okay, I just read the whole thing, and it's a little bit like a huge info dump. Obviously, these are all interesting people and they all ...

Hey there, I'm Poem. Welcome to YWS! :) I liked this poem, but it was rather short. Maybe you could try adding some length to it, perhaps an example of ...

Hello, I liked this! I have to say that my first line is my favourite, (The first line that was written by you). The only thing that struck me as ...

I really liked the description that you had here, and the rhythm worked really well. Your title drew me in, great job! I’m sure that I’ll adapt. Is the only ...

Hey there, Is this the end of your story? Personally, I think that this would be an awesome ending, but there are a lot of things that you could do ...

THis is a lot like a story that I am writing currently. :) I think that you should keep going with it. It will be hard not to have much ...

I thought that this was wonderful. I liked how you started and ended all of the stanzas with the same line. That made the last stanza stand out, so great ...

Wow. I really liked this. I felt like you let the reader get to know the characters. Plus the end had some great imagery. The idea of a blackened sun ...

I really enjoyed this! I thought that it was written well, but have you thought of splitting it up into different stanzas? It might make it flow easier. I think ...

Uh, just to let you know, their mother, Rhea, didn't choose who ruled. Zeus just ruled, because he was the one to kill Kronos, their father. Also, their powers aren't ...