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Re: 2. Monday Morning Minus Moping (Redrafted)
Hello :) Let's review shall we? As you noticed there is no blue in this review. There's a reason for that I swear :) I wanted to get straight to ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: No longer a part of the novel
It’s been an entire month since Jamie and I decided to call things off and I am still semi-depressed about the whole thing. We weren’t going out for long and ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Experiment - Preview
I'm not a big fan of science - fiction but this was good. I like this alot actually. There wasn't anything the needed correcting since it was a small piece. ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Tug-of-War
Hey here to review ! :) First I think you can make this into a poem.You just have to put it in stanzas and such Today I walk away and ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Today
This was a very cute poem. I really like the metaphor you used. It kept me wanting to read. I wanted to know if he hit the slope or if ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: 0. Prologue (Redrafted)
Hey Amiemalamie, here to review like I promised :) It was sort of peculiar looking at myself lay so still and quiet on the metal, white-sheeted bed. I liked that ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 10
Hey Theotherone, here to review!! (: Let me start off my saying I love this novel Now nitpicks : When we got to our friends, they were ready to go ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 9
Heyy ! Here to review :) I didn’t have the chance to talk to Rose again, no comma during the afternoon. I wanted to know why she felt so strongly ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Superglue - chapter 1
Hey Ofir , This isn't a total review I know but I just had to tell you I loved this ! The topic of cutting is really hard to express,but ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 [Marco]
Hello AnneMarie96 ! Here to review! :) Secret love my escape take me far, far away, secret love are you there will you answer me prayer, please take me anywhere ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Hey theotherone ! I'm here to review. And just to let you know I've been dying until you posted another chapter of this novel so when I saw it I ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 1)
Hey DylanRay , Here to review ! My correction will be in purple The Birds are flying freely in the Sky This sentence got my attention. But only because I ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Why?
Hello Colie, Here for a quick review! Impression: The poem flowed quite well. It was about a topic that many can relate to and you did a good job executing ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby here to review (:, I must say I really liked this. The slang & spelling errors give it voice, they make it feel real. It has so much ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Personally, I really found Tuesdays with Morrie BORING! I began to read it because 1.) it was on this list my english teacher gave the class and 2.) my friend ...
Oct 7, 2010
