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I cried when I read this. Very emotional, very powerful. It's such a sad ending, too. But, just separating it into paragraph, no divided sections would be better and easier ...

I liked this :) It was good to read but if you made it a bit longer that would have been awesome Also, that guy's fail made me LOL my ...

Cookie! I know I read this at school, but it's still awesome! Oh by the way, reading club in Mr. Horans classroom at lunch, if you wanna come

Wow. I thought this was great! You have a talent for writing, Though the chuck at the end was kind of difficult to read, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The ...

Sorry, I copied and pasted it from word. And he's called Felix in that one bit because it used to be linked to something else I started ages ago. I ...

I kinda of started crying. It was really sad and sweet Georgie x

Well, it's about food, which is awesome. I loved how short and cute it was. Simple wording Georgie x

It was deep and had a lot of meaning in the words. I liked the way that every line in each stanza ended rhyming in the las word of the ...

wow... I thought it was simple, but elegant. the way you write is incredibly eye catching and the way you rhyme is nothing short of perfect :) Georgie x

Burst of feelings XD Sorry.. This is really good! Description was good, vocabulary was amazing and it seemed really emotional :) Georgie x

This made me cry a little bit! It is so touching and emotional and it was just so amazing! Your talent is raw and natural. Keep writing! Georgie x

YOUR ARE SO FREAKIN AWESOME! this caught my eye with just the title, and I just had to read it about ten times. You have a very unique way of ...

I loved it. It was really cute and the protaganist really seemed to love Scarlett. What exactly happened to him to kill him? Just out of interest.... :)

I thought that this was so beautiful and sweet

short sweet and very charming. nothing more to say excapt was the heck is a pricker? Georgie x