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SOunds like a poem crossed with a story (Like my "I Love You" submission). It was sweet, sad, and a very unique writing style that captures the imagination. :) Georgie ...

I love the food reference (food lover over here ;) ) anyway, I thought it was short and sweet and to the point, something nice about heartbreak for once. :)

This was really cute :) I thought that it was also very emotional is a strange way :)

well, It was a compelling story line. It got a little boring near the end and yes, there were some spelling errors. I'm just not going to point them out. ...

I thought that it was very emotional and in some cases, funny. I could relate to that (THANKS A LOT. JOE!!) which made it easy to read and understand. I ...

It's really sweet that you said that he broke his own heart, and the other dude didn't. It was a little too depressing, to be honest, but it was good ...

As a bisexual, I thought that you captured the lesbian scene perfectly. I love that Sarah was a lesbian who was marrying a homophobe who didnt except his daugters sexuality. ...

It was very cute, kind of sad and just really good. It expressed what a little child would think when they were young and how they still felt as they ...

It's not bad, but there are some spelling errors. I like the way you narrated it, as if it was happening right now. I love how you described the moon ...

It's very sweet and a little teary. I love that Logan really cares about Abbey and vice versa. You have a talent for writing. Also, I love that you added ...

In general, it was quite a charming story. I liked that Marie usally won bets, but she didn't win this one and also that the dragon was quite calm, but ...

This was amazing! You should make this into a novel or something. I think that you could make it as a famous writer and I also think that you have ...

W.O.W It was very emotional and with great description. I liked that there was no happy ending which makes it a lot better for the reader who expects the main ...